We have mainly only made changes to the end of our opening
- A man is looking for a car in a newspaper
- When he finds one he circles the address and details of the people who are selling it
- Then rips out the page and travels to the house by car.
- Meanwhile a teenage girl home alone and she is talking to her boyfriend on her phone when she hears a knock at the door.
- After a brief conversation she invites him in and then goes up stairs to get changed.
- The mysterious man follows her upstairs and walks into a room he thought she went in only to find no one there.
- He looks around the room and in a chest of drawers
- As he opens the draw we see a hooded figure standing behind him
- POV shot of the murderer with the knife and stabbing his victim
- The camera cuts to outside when we hear a girl screaming.
- It then cuts again inside the house where there is a hand on the girls shoulder and when she turns around it is her boyfriend.
- After a conversation they decide to go upstairs to the bedroom
- We see a shot of the "dead" man lying on the floor and background noise of the pair running up the stairs
- Extreme close up of the "dead" mans eyes opening
- The last shot is the man who was suppose to be dead sitting up when the scrren blacks out
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