RS - Feedback on our Second Sample Footage

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Here is evidence of feedback on our second sample footage recorded. I posted the sample footage on Facebook so I could get peoples opinions/feedback given to me in a comment below the video. We will use this feedback to improve our film.

After reading all the feedback we recieved, we have made the shots quicker, as we thought it would allow us to fit more into the 2 mins we have and also keep the pace going and not bore the audience. We have also made it more obvious as to why the car was being used in it, by making a clear shot of a newspaper with "motoring" written on the top and the man circling a car inside it. Once we have made the rough cut we will also post the video to youtube and facebook for further feedback to get the film just right.